LOOKING AT LOVE

Valentine’s Day. A day for declarations of love. For gifts. For meals or outings with the person you care for. Tonight, my date was a writer named Lisa and a group of people who were interested in learning more about poetry. For ninety minutes, we listened to prompts and shared the words they had inspired.…

Valentine’s Day. A day for declarations of love. For gifts. For meals or outings with the person you care for.

Tonight, my date was a writer named Lisa and a group of people who were interested in learning more about poetry. For ninety minutes, we listened to prompts and shared the words they had inspired. While our themes were similar, not one poem sounded like anyone else’s. We differed in style, in length of response, and the intensity with which we wrote.

For our final poem, we were asked to use jargon to write about something we were grateful for. This task threw me because I have much to be thankful for, yet nothing came to mind. For the first time all evening, I floundered. I started writing and stopped after a couple of lines. I changed the subject three times. My mind seemed to be locked on the fact that the evening was over, and it was time to leave. And so, I wrote about what I knew was waiting for me when I got home – my husband, my sons and the table I had decorated before going to work this morning.

When you get to the end of my words, you can judge for yourself whether I did justice to the photo I had taken of the display on the table before I left for the workshop. Feel free to add your comments at the end of this blog.

And, Happy Valentine’s Day if you’re into celebrating love.

A Day of Love, 2024

(written by Natalie Bock, 14Feb24)

On the dining table

Love awaits

Tones of red with pink relief

Silver names on scarlet card

Foiled hearts

and pin art love

patiently pressed in

with fingers more wrinkled

than the ones that prepared

our first feast

thirty years ago.

In the centre,

an object of my desire

and your frustrations

calls us both

to the cause of the day

Hearts intermingle

scattered on Christmas cloth

laid across bare beige wood.

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